Help!

[stellie]

And may sheep invade your dreams.

I can't figure out if leaving it here -- the child, asleep, with the three objects from the story his mother was reading him before he fell asleep (teddy bear, beach ball, tricycle) in his room -- or if I should have the actual sheep in the room with him at this point.

The little sheepie at the bottom is definitely the end page.

Anyone have input on the layout, though?

EDIT:



Goodnight, sweet lamb...

Page before the first image -- dunno if I really want to elaborate more with the mother walking away between this page and the other or just leave it at this. Rawr.

Comments

[garney.livejournal.com]

Have a peeping sheep in the bare corner there? It looks... bare

[stellie.livejournal.com]

Yes, yes it does.

I wonder... book layout kinda makes or breaks a peeping sheep -- depends a great deal on the page previous... time to sketch that one out, I guess!